Design review · v2

Fernhollow landing page

Second pass on the marketing site for the journaling app. Pins on the mockup match the notes below. Leave a decision on the headline by Thursday.

MOwner Maya SLP3 reviewers Decision due Thu, Oct 23
fernhollow.app
A quieter journal1
Write a little.
Notice a lot.

Two minutes a day, one gentle prompt, and a weekly look back at what actually moved you. Private by default, on every device.

Start your 30 days See a sample week2

Free for 30 days · no card needed · export anytime

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Tue · Oct 14Evening
What felt lighter today?
This month18 daysof writing
Weekly look-back ready
One prompt a day

Short, kind questions that change with the seasons. Skip any you don't like.

Weekly look-back

Every Sunday, a calm summary of moods, themes and moments worth keeping.

Private by default

Entries are encrypted on your device. Nobody reads them but you.

4 Loved by people who never stuck with a journal before Northloop Quillhouse Brightfold Halden Mosswork
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Free$0

Daily prompt, 30-day history

Fernhollow Plus$4/mo

Unlimited history, look-backs, export

Review notes

1
Headline: keep it, or go more concrete?

"Write a little. Notice a lot." tested well with the team, but Leo thinks it undersells the weekly look-back. Two options below.

Decision neededLeo · 2 replies
2
Primary CTA contrast

Forest on cream passes AA (9.8:1). The ghost button is 3.2:1 — fine for large text only, so bump the border to 2px.

OpenPriya
3
Hero illustration feels busy on small phones

Drop the floating "Weekly look-back" tag under 400px and keep the entry and streak cards.

OpenSam
4
Logo strip

Placeholder wordmarks until legal clears real customer logos. Keep the line above it; it reads warmer than "Trusted by".

ResolvedMaya
5
Pricing teaser

Show the yearly price as the default? Plus at $4/mo vs $36/yr. Holding until finance confirms the yearly number.

OpenMaya · blocked on finance

Palette

Forest#1F3B2D
Moss#2C5240
Sage#9FD3B4
Clay#D9734E
Paper#F7F2E8

Type scale

Display800 · 56/58 · −4%
Section title750 · 32/36 · −2%
Body copy reads at seventeen.400 · 17/26
Caption and fine print500 · 13/18

Pick a headline by Thursday

Reply in the thread with A or B. If it's a tie, we ship A and test B next month.

OPTION A · CURRENTWrite a little. Notice a lot.

Short, calm, memorable. Says less about what you get.

MP2 votes
OPTION BTwo minutes a day. One honest look back each week.

Concrete about the habit and the payoff. Longer on mobile.

L1 vote

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